Love Poem: Echoes of My Love
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Written by: Lu Loo

Echoes of My Love

I need you, 
my words echo in the distance,
into an abyss of darkness-
Your eyes sparkled and I spoke with my fingers.
Your touch, it held me... 
                my words you grasp.

I need you, 
my words were deep seeded 
in reminiscence into a chasm of nullity.
Your fever broke and I awoke with you by my side.
Your lips, they held me...
                        my verses you comprehend. 

Humanity resists with adherence, 
yet you show discern for my complicated mind-
Your mouth without guile,
your hands toil to eternity to provide our daily bread. 
You curl your grace around my spine, 
the heavens fall and tremble at my feet.
I need not anticipation of tomorrow 
as my sorrow is bloodstained and 
       I am reborn. 

Does this love even make sense?
There are too many metaphors to disentangle-
too many syllables to count.

                 For the comfort of my skin against yours 
                 outweighs any fallacies we may encounter.



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