Love Poem: Eight Word Challenge- Losses of My Life
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Written by: Lu Loo

Eight Word Challenge- Losses of My Life

Looking outside my sill at the stardust waiting to fall,
   I see Cashmere, my ivory horse, ready to leave the stall.   
I remember the days when simplicity was all I knew, 
   when I would consider my good intentions in all I say and do. 
      For there is no greater love than the love I had with you. 

      Emptiness fills my essence and days no longer bring joy, 
   and to know it all started with the loss of our little boy. 
I can’t find relief knowing I brought you such pain,
   filled my soul with the damage of anger and disdain. 
     Now only engravings of sadness seem to remain. 

     We were building a future filled with happy reminiscing,
   now your gentle embrace is all I seem to be missing. 
As I consider why you left I see now I was at fault,
   and can comprehend why your adoration came to a halt. 
        In between the warmth and cold I was definitely caught. 

     I knew no boundaries with my anguish and woe, 
   and caused you such misery making it hard to let go. 
I now see atonement for me will not be obtained, 
  I know why your fondness diminished and refrained. 
     The ceasing of gratitude; no respect can be contained. 

     
     Please forgive me with sympathy, so very sorry am I, 
     I just can’t get over these losses no matter how hard I try. 


Eight Word Challenge Poetry Contest
Robert Haigh
March 1, 2018