Love Poem: Eight Word Challenge - After the Thrill Is Gone

Eight Word Challenge - After the Thrill Is Gone

Eight Word Challenge – After the Thrill is Gone

Like an exotic orchid in the glow
of moonbeams, I unfolded 
vulnerable petals, inviting you in. 
And even radiant rainbows would exult 
in the opulence of our love.  
But loving you was a roller coaster ride… 
a ride you enjoyed; but the vicarious 
thrill of waltzing on the edge of 
an emotional chasm whittled away at my heart. 

Now the thrill of the ride is gone,
and silken smiles on your satin lips
make a mockery of my feelings for you.
The impetus to love you has faded 
like blush fading from the red roses 
you left on my doorsteps last night.

Those heartbreaking red symbols of love,
I thrashed them; and their bruised petals
now adorn the garbage can in my backyard.
For they only multiplied my pain,
the pain you chiseled into my heart,
a heart still raw and deeply scarred...
after the thrill is gone.

09-02-2018

Contest:    Eight Word Challenge – 8 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:    John Hamilton
Placement: 3rd

8 words: vicarious, chasm, exult, opulence, silken, mockery, impetus, adorn