Love Poem: Needle In the Hay
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Written by: Black Eyed Susan

Needle In the Hay

I thought you were my needle in the hay
The soulmate I’d been searching for, for endless days
The love of a lifetime, here on poetrysoup
Right under my nose, and I never knew 
Till I found you one night, when I couldn’t sleep
Your words like sweet bees, pollinating me 

We chatted and joked and had so much fun 
I realized at once that you were “the one” 
The one to complete me, the one I had sought
Until I saw your new picture, and saw you were NOT
The “Chris” that I thought - but a girl!
A GIRL! A gir-l couldn’t complete my world! 

You weren’t a needle in the hay 
You were just you, with your gir-l face 
Your tiger picture, a fantasy mistake -
A dead flower I shake out of my vase 
The dreams I held fast
Red petals, now in the trash


3/12/12
Inspired by Chris Aechtner