Love Poem: Rythm of Love
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Written by: Angel Marie

Rythm of Love

When I look into your eyes,  

a river flows through me  


The connection I feel with you, 

In English or in Spanish,  

there are no words to describe  


Even though we're both far away, 

you make every day a better day 

  
Your voice,   

resonates in my mind 

My heart,  

synchronizing in tune  

to the rhythm of love.  



~~ I wrote this for a guy I have been dating recently. (I'm 28, he's 30). Please be honest, would a 30-year old man enjoy this poem or is it too boring/basic, etc?