Love Poem: Tender Hush of a Whisper
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Written by: Lu Loo

Tender Hush of a Whisper

“i say to you in a tender hush 
as you gently close your eyes,
uttering under my breath to 
make you finally realize...
i love you to the lowest demise, 
                              up to the highest skies.”



i crave your very existence,
am enticed by your unyielding touch-
perpetually bound to your side with honor, 
never needing anything else to survive. 
forget me not if i wither away into eventide’s 
silhouette,
            for tonight i shan’t forget-
            you’re why the sun set. 

fear not what lies ahead, my beloved-
for i am but a woman longing to be near
you without anger.
i fall onto my aching knees…
             with you all my pain does cease-
             for you bring me such passionate ease.

i shall bathe myself in your eternal 
regard for my undying affection-
you shall lather your soul in a cascade
of our never ending connection. 

             for i am free in you....







(I chose this one out of the last month)

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